A's prolific writing
A's teacher sent home some of her school work from the year and the most impressive thing she sent was this writing about our trip to Disney World. I'm copying it letter for letter.
"Guess what! My family and me went to walt disney world it was spictaculure! I loved it so much. And also I went to clear water beach! And guess what I got my clthes all wet! and my shoes filled with sand! I felt very uncoufurterbull! so I asked for a towel! but that's nto all I fineally got dry! after I finish Disney I go to the hotel and sleep. The first day at Disney Wolrd I rode a ride called Goofys barn fun! The roller-coaster goes up then down then sideways. That was increteybull and fun. And also I herd the increatbulls music. That was super. After that I rode on a other ride. That was a fun song to listen to! Also I saw a show at Cinderrela's castale and she got to be crwed a princess! And on the 3rd day I went on a ride called the dinouosour. But it was a scary ride so I got the sivers! But my mom wasn't scared. And neither was Grandma or Y (our friend who went with us). So I siad I didn't like it! Because it would Scare your pant's off I tell you. Bcause there was a scry dinousur. So that's why I didn't like it. So my mom siad I don't have to go on it again. But then we went on a not so scary. Also on the 3rd day I went on a ride called The Twierly macien. That was fun too. And also I saw Jasmine (backward J), and Bell, and snowwite, and Cinderealla! and they all looked Buteifull! My favrite was Jasmine (backward J again). And I also saw Aliadin. After that I saw Butey and the Beast. that was a fun show to! But I relly loved space moutin. Because I went on it 2 times. But I liked it a lot. I also enjoid (backward j again) the rock'n roller coaster. "
She used hyphens to split words in there too which I thought was pretty impressive, however she split the word wherever she wanted. She even put a period on the next line once connected by a hyphen.
"Guess what! My family and me went to walt disney world it was spictaculure! I loved it so much. And also I went to clear water beach! And guess what I got my clthes all wet! and my shoes filled with sand! I felt very uncoufurterbull! so I asked for a towel! but that's nto all I fineally got dry! after I finish Disney I go to the hotel and sleep. The first day at Disney Wolrd I rode a ride called Goofys barn fun! The roller-coaster goes up then down then sideways. That was increteybull and fun. And also I herd the increatbulls music. That was super. After that I rode on a other ride. That was a fun song to listen to! Also I saw a show at Cinderrela's castale and she got to be crwed a princess! And on the 3rd day I went on a ride called the dinouosour. But it was a scary ride so I got the sivers! But my mom wasn't scared. And neither was Grandma or Y (our friend who went with us). So I siad I didn't like it! Because it would Scare your pant's off I tell you. Bcause there was a scry dinousur. So that's why I didn't like it. So my mom siad I don't have to go on it again. But then we went on a not so scary. Also on the 3rd day I went on a ride called The Twierly macien. That was fun too. And also I saw Jasmine (backward J), and Bell, and snowwite, and Cinderealla! and they all looked Buteifull! My favrite was Jasmine (backward J again). And I also saw Aliadin. After that I saw Butey and the Beast. that was a fun show to! But I relly loved space moutin. Because I went on it 2 times. But I liked it a lot. I also enjoid (backward j again) the rock'n roller coaster. "
She used hyphens to split words in there too which I thought was pretty impressive, however she split the word wherever she wanted. She even put a period on the next line once connected by a hyphen.
posted by Christine K. at 4:08 AM
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